please critique my render

hi, im a begginer 3D artist. I've been working with Cinema 4D for a few months, and i want to send a render to a magazine in the hopes of getting published. Before i do so, i would like any and every one to please critique my render, and tell me what i should improve on. I would very much appreciate it, thanks,

--Ender

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