Great work. Lacking only more water on walls and maybe some from the pipe. If there would have been water on the walls i could have gone for an intentional clogged-up pipe and not thought much about that, but since its lacking on the walls you must have forgotten it is my guess.

(Off-topic: Most 3Dartist pics look overworked, less is better, too much also gets it "cartoonish" since it's futile to try mimic real life pics totally. There aint anything "real" in any film yet for example, xcept for the first Jurassic Park......maybe......and also some scenes in the Lord of the rings trilogy since its pure fantasy and we dont know and cant feel how it "should" look. But every time something like the Final Fantasy movie is made and everyone hypes about how good it looks, it always is a HUGE disappointment to anyone with enough sense to be critical even when understanding that its better than previous things...)

stormy factory is really atmospheric.it has a great essence and feel.
good(not that much) lighting for the dragon fly

Storm Factory reminds me of some of the deserted factories in Voronezh, you captured the construction and appearance very well. Your buildings are in much better shape :) Nice pics!

I like dragONtFLY, but for some reason I'm having trouble understanding the scale of it...
I really appreciate everything else about it though, especially the style of metal working you chose.

well its simply awsome... creative..

Both images look great. Very nicely lit.

I agree with the others that the hammer looks too new. Not enough scratches and rust.
As for the buildings they look too dry for that rainy day. When concrete and brick get wet they get a lot darker than you have it. I see some darkness on the top area of the buildings, but the rain looks like it's really coming down. Also, I might suggest also adding some water gushing out of the gutter drain. And of course water splashing on the ground from the falling rain.

Congraturations Denis! Great work!

This look good, but there are things in there should have been texture with a little dirt or rust to show age (like the hammer and the magnified glass.) When every thing in a picture looks to new it will make the picture look cartoonish.

great.I"m lovin it

excellent