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Castle |
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Cheese |
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Ice |
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Magic Room |
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| by J.Mc. WPG., CA.: |
2005-10-06 |
| Great lighting and overall composition. The problem is the lack of a sense of depth between the gate/wall and the castle behind it. Try to create one by making the castle itself seem a little less distinct in terms of detail. The further an object is from the observer, the less focused detail there is. Still, great work. |
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| posted anonymously: |
2004-09-15 |
The images are very dark, not sure whether you chose dark, or the image processing somehow caused it. However, I think it is a pity to go to the effort to model so much in Magic Room and not light it so we can see it.
Cheese is good, though the texturing makes them look a little more like wood. The humour in it is nice though. As mentioned by another reviewer, you should avoid mirroring the texture on the face of the cheese on the right - a more random pattern would be more realistic - mirroring is fine when you wish to show an adjacent slice from the original, etc. The lighting in this image is a little strange too - maybe a spotlight on an object rather than the table surface might have been more interesting?
The best one here i think is Ice. It is simple and bright, so we can see the modeling/texturing better. I like the texture on the glass under the tray - very realistic.
Overall I would recommend lighting and texturing as areas to work on. Angle and composition in your images are good. |
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2004-09-06 |
Cheese is a good one.
I like the humour in it.
The other ones are a bit too dark, except Ice.
That one is nice, but not exciting, while it's just a box of ice cubes. |
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